THAT WOMAN YOU SEE
I just absolutely love reading a
collection of short stories. This one has all nine dedicated to women. I just
had to pick this one up for this combination.
1) Ganga : She who is pure- This describes the "girls of the night".
How a girl full of love gets into the flesh trade business. It is written fine.
But it is not a story that touches your heart inspite of such a strong premise.
There is a place where there is a grammatical error. Better editing could have
sorted that out.
2) Gauri: She who is
fair- This tale is about
Gauri's son- Shyam and her daughter in law- Shweta. She comes to stay at their
place for a while and notices their marital discord. Is she able to solve the
issues or accepts the disharmony is what the story encompasses. The story is
written well. Also the character of Shweta has been written to perfection. You
almost feel the pain she is going through. A Good read. But more than Gauri's
story it sounded like Shweta's story so a little discomfort there as a reader.
3) Radhika: She who is
successful - This is a
story of a woman who picks herself from the dumps and emerges a winner. Another
favourite topic- Politics is also embibed in this. The way it starts out, it
evokes the right amount of curiosity. Considering that, the climax was a
disappointment. One almost feels incomplete. Could have been developed
brilliantly as the character of Radhika is also etched to perfection.
4) Riddhima: She who is
full of love- This story
is about Riddhima- her brother-Rishi, her sister-in-law- Pratima and a certain
Mr.Aman. Rishi dotes on Riddhima as they have lost their parents. Again the
interest developed in the start is good. Keeps you connected. Urges you to read
further. But the climax is hastened. If worked better, this would have been the
pick of all the stories. Neverthless, it is written well.
5) Sheeba: A Promise- This is a very sly story of how Sheeba teaches her
colleague Rajeev a lesson. How she realises that he always took her for a ride
by his sweet talks and used that to move forward in his career. This one has
been written well.
6) Shikha: She who is
powerful- Shikha is
one of the women whose husbands dont have time for them. They are away leaving
the wives to sulk at home. A very common subject about how to cope in such a situation.
An expected climax but nonetheless liked reading this one. It had an element of
"feel good" factor.
7) Shivangita: She who
has courage- This is a
mother's letter to her son which reveals a lot of things about her life which
the son was unaware of. It leads to a point where the son feels that he didnt
know about his mother's life at all. Does his perception about his mother
change or he understands his mothers plight, is the story of Shivangita.
8) Shruti: She who
hears- I really cant
review this one as I didn't understand the purpose of this story and what the
author is trying to say this tale.
9) Sona: She who is
valuable- This one is a beauty. My favourite from the
lot. It has been written well. An unexpected climax. Touches your heart.
One can certainly give this a miss!!
STARS- 2.25/5
The review was first published on talespensieve.com